Nikolai don’t worry, you’ve been through an ordeal

Don’t think about that girl, I doubt she’s even real

People were so wrong, and too quick to misjudge

Jake with his false opinions, seems to hold a grudge

He called you an insolent child, but look at the smarmy git

He digs himself in deeper, he’ll end up landing in shit.

Jen and I have your back, we’ll help you to your feet

We’ve been worried since the accident ; you’re struggling to make ends meet

Nik, please don’t let your troubled head over rule your heart.

Jenna completely adores you, she’s loved you since the start.

The American girl is plastic, fickle and entirely fake

Don’t break Jenna’s heart. You’ll make the ultimate mistake.

©Sophie Bowns 2011-2014

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13 thoughts on “Tim- reassurance

  1. Great Poem! I can feel the passion almost tangibly with which it is written. Reminds me of all my years working with Young people and the many issues they have to deal with! Have a great week and keep up the fab work 🙂

  2. This is beautiful and you are amazing!!!! Thank you so much for sharing these beautiful words and for such a wonderful response…:)

  3. i really like how you have written things from each of the characters’ viewpoints. it really helps to round out their characters a bit. )

  4. OMG! I love this poem. It really spoke to me. Thank you for visiting and commenting on my blog. It gave me the chance to read your wonderful words 🙂

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