Hello everyone, I thought it might be a good idea to ask you, my readers. I was considering posting the last chapter of Theodore tomorrow. However, I’d like to hear your opinions. Is there anything within the story that you’d like me to touch more upon before I complete it? The last thing I want, is for people not to like the ending!

I’d really appreciate your help/ feedback. What do you think?

-Sophie

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11 thoughts on “Theodore- The end is in sight

  1. I may be remembering incorrectly – but wasn’t Theodore supposed to complete some tasks as directed by the ghost or spirit of Bonnie’s father before he would be allowed to die? Did he complete all of them?. Getting his father the King to return was one of them – were there supposed to be others? Also, I would still like to see Theodore get a little better-just to give everyone hope – before he does die – I want to see that Queen be punished for her behavior all these years. But if you feel the story is at an end, so be it. Next (remember, I’m not from a country that has royals) the King – legally is he above the Queen or is she the true ruler? That may have been at the beginning of the story and I’m sorry if I didn’t catch it. . Can he send her away? Why must the King leave? I guess I have some unanswered questions that might be nice to have answered before “The End”, although they may have been answered a while back. Sorry!

    1. Hey Alana, thank you so much for your helpful feedback! Hmm, yes, that’s a thought I should probably hilight on the tasks a bit more, even if they are very simple ones which could be done at Theodore’s bedside perhaps?
      Yes, the King is higher than his wife, but she is a much stronger character than him. No, your questions were brilliant & really helpful. It’s handy that they will be saved underneath this post!
      THANK YOU! I appreciate your help SO much! 😀

  2. Thank you for a magnificent read Sophie – love your characters and the storyline filled with tender moments and high drama. Just wanted to see how Bonnie’s family end up and also Jane – though I’m sure you’ve covered this xx

  3. I’ve awarded you the Blog of the Year Award 2013! (Forgive me if I’ve awarded you before and you declined, it’s hard to keep track of). There’s no obligation to accept, I understand completely if you don’t. Anyway, thanks for liking posts on my blog “The Journal of Wall Grimm.” I appreciate your coming by. For details about the award, please see my post http://wp.me/p41c99-oB Happy Holidays and have a peaceful and prosperous New Year! Sage

  4. Hi Sophie, interesting read. I always look forward to d post. I would have loved if d prince’s child didn’t die as in it would have been uplifting if he left a child behind, just so the King can have some sort of peace. But guess that’s not possible anymore.
    Looking forward to d next post.

  5. yes, i agree with alana about the tasks. maybe one or two, somehow tying in with justice as far as the queen, bonnie and her family, the king, howard, or jane. also, what about the queen being locked in her room and her son dying without her saying a true goodbye (even though she is evil)? deathbed regrets? will bonnie get there in time? will the king keep bonnie and howard and her family on in some capacity? all just questions mulling around in my brain, you don’t have to answer them ) i’ve really enjoyed this story –

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