An eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth

Is as the saying goes the absolute truth

If you hurt others they’ll hurt you

I dare say Karma will get you too

The rule is the punishment meets the crime

So don’t do anything you’ll regret in time

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25 thoughts on “An eye for an eye (A short poem)

      1. if you say so, just get the impression its rushed and not much thought went into it

      1. Ok, maybe be more original, use words that rhyme that have more than one syllable, improve the sentance structure and then post something.

      2. you say in your about me section that you’d be grateful for any feedback, you cant just pick and choose which feedback you want to accept

  1. I really like this one. I think if you’d try to make it longer, you’d have ruined it. Sometimes poems are better being short and to the point.

    And to ‘unknown’, how can you criticise someone’s writing, when you don’t even use punctuation?!

    1. Thanks Claire…. yeah it was meant to be short for a dramatic type effect !
      Ha **Sophie high-fives Claire** !! and also to “Unknown” you’re a COWARD !!

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